Hey just letting all of you know, im making a new quest, this one is about a noob!😛
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PDJ1enM6IAc
If the link above doesnt work then try this. Then watch it on the channel.
Noob's Quest(my newest quest)
Your dungeons look decent, but there are some empty screens here an there. I'll admit, I did not pay as much attention to the design as I did just how the screens looked, but they appear to be good. Maybe throw some blocks down in the emptier rooms (unless they remain empty for a reason).
The overworld though.. I have to say looks pretty bland. It looks like a good structure, but the screens in the "dark/ lava" area need something. There are a lot of empty screens.
Basically, just make each screen not look like the last, and your good.
Have I at least improved a little from my 3 crap quests?