Ok Rulehy, I just finished playing through levels 1-4 of your demo and I think you are doing pretty well for your first quest. It is also much better than the first demo you released. Keep up the improvements, especially in your levels. The levels may still be a bit shorter than most may like but you do have some difficult enemy placements to that may make it a bit tougher for everyone to blow right through.
Let me just list a few notes for you to make adjustments to:
Grammatical errors:
*Here's a big one I noticed right away. It's Ganon, NOT GANNON! Be careful because some people here will nail you on that bad! The old man in the very first house says this to you.
*Next a change for the man who gives you the sword. It's "Triforce pieces" not "Triforce peaces."
*The man who gives you the first spell (forest) should say won't (you forgot the apostrophe) and make it a lowercase w for "way."
Undercombo bugs:
If you need pictures of these areas, let me know. I took some snapshots but to save the upload time I will just describe them here.
*In the forest area there is a heart piece that you get to by moving armos statues above it. The undercombo needs to be set for the armos statues.
*South of the lake (below level 4) there is an area with tombstones. If you slash the bushes there, they are missing the undercombo.
*There is also a room in level 2 where the undercombo is missing for the pots in the room. It was either the room with the key or the item, I can’t remember which, but it’s to the far right on the map.
Other bugs:
*I am having the same issue as ShadowTiger with the block in level 3. It resets in front of the door and I can’t leave after obtaining the boss key. I had to quit and continue to finish the level.
*Holdrum Village has a dmap intro that freezes the screen. You have to quit and continue to get out of the bug. Set the level number higher than 9 for that dmap and that problem should be fixed.
*The cave where you get Din’s Fire seems to have a weird warp out. The screen flashed and then I appeared outside. You may want to check your side warp settings there.
Well, that’s all I have to offer for now. Check out these issues and follow what others have told you, especially ST because I lot of what he pointed out too. I’m looking forward to seeing more progress. Have fun!