I need alot of feedback. I want to leabr Bass and maybe start a band over the Summer, so i have been writing alot of songs. Most of my freinds enjoy them. But I need alot of Diff opions from other people so, anyone who reads these just post a lil feedback, thanks. 😊
"School Girls"
The girls at my school aren't worth my time
They treat me like garbage
And that�s just fine
I�ll mind my own business
If you just mind your own
If I wanted your opinion
I would call you on the phone
Don�t expect me
To go out of my way
Because I am very independent
And that�s all I can say
I don�t need you in my life
I don�t want you either
You fill me with hatred
And give me a fever
You act all high and mighty
You say that you don�t care
You give me glares of evil
And fill me with fear
The girls at my school aren't worth my time
They treat me like garbage
And that�s just fine
I have made it this far
And I have made it alone
Girls are worthless
They just bitch and moan
Why waste your time
Why waste your pride
To please a stupid bitch
Who will stab you in the side?
If you want to be happy
Take my advice
Girls are not worth it
Your hand will have to suffice
and:
"Days with Friends"
Some days are better then others
Some days I just have more fun
But some days just tear me to shreds
The best times of my life
Have been spent with friends
The worst times
I have spent alone
I hope they know
How much they mean to me
And that I am thankful to have them
By my side
Friends keep me going
And friends don�t let me stop
Friends make life worth living
And I am thankful for that
Some days I feel rejected
Some days I feel fine
But some days are very hectic
Why must I waste all my time
The best times of my life
Have been spent with friends
The worst times
I have spent alone
I hope they know
How much they mean to me
And that I am thankful to have them
By my side
Friends keep me going
And friends don�t let me stop
Friends make life worth living
And I am thankful for that