A very simple game. Find something wrong with the above post. Whether it be a spelling mistake, they way the worded a sentance, anything that's wrong. Just find something wrong with the last post. No flaming.
I beleive that you switched the words they and the in the above post.
Believe is spelled wrong,
The more beautiful and pure a thing is, the more satisfying it is to corrupt.
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The period! Were's the period man?
Do you enjoy challenging RPGs? Do you enjoy dark storylines? You'll like my game. Go on, it's not very long.Originally Posted by phattonez
You can download my game for free right here!
Feedback on it would be nice. It'll help with future projects.
You mispelled 'where'. Such a terrible thing you did. You did go to school, right?
The more beautiful and pure a thing is, the more satisfying it is to corrupt.
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And you misspelled 'mispelled'. Its a common mistake.
Dude, you put an apostrophe instead of a quotaton mark.
Not good.
Do you enjoy challenging RPGs? Do you enjoy dark storylines? You'll like my game. Go on, it's not very long.
You can download my game for free right here!
Feedback on it would be nice. It'll help with future projects.
Why would you worry about a puncuation mark if you cant even remeber the "I" in quotation?
You have clearly failed sixth grade english class.
The words; punctuation and remember have been spelled incorrectly. Also, the word "can't" was missing a certain something.
The use of ; instreead of "comma ,".
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