Zelda: Excape from the Swamp of Doom

[Mega Link]

I'm still working on it. I need some ideas. Here is what I currently have:

1)Link starts in Hyrule. He goes in his house. His mom tells him to go to the castle, and gives him her boomerang.
2)Once the Castle is beaten the king tells him to go thourgh the portal next to him, (to the swamp) and return with the 6 tokens.
3)Link encounters his dark side. (For the first time.) Link does not fight him yet.
4)He meets a wolf puppy who can talk. (This is a magical swamp) The Puppy growls. Link backs up, grabs his boomerang and throws it at the pup. But that just just makes him angry. Now it's a mono to wolfo battle (enemie type unknown). When Link wins the wolf pup heads straight for his father, yelping. Link follows.
5)They go to the wolf's father, but his dark side controled him...
6)Link asks about the 6 tokens. The wolf marks them on his map, and tells him to go for the fire token first. However, Link needs the ladder to do so. The wolf sends link thourh a time warp to where the ladder is. Time warps are relative so the ladder isn't there anymore instead there are stairs there...
7)Once that area is beaten, Link is warped back to the swamp, unable to get back to Wolfie's father. Wolfie (the wolf pup) follows Link, helping him, on his journey to fire mountain. However he is detoured. Falling, Link encounters his dark side who has taken wolfie hostage! Go left and you get warp back to Hyrule, go right and your traped with the swamp token and the sea dragon, go straight and you go thourgh a challenging labybrinth and save Wolfie. What should Link do?...
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?)At the end Link returns with the 6 tokens. He finds the king being held captive. He is told to find the wind mage and kill him.
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[redlink111]

4)He meets a wolf puppy who can talk. (This is a magical swamp) The Puppy growls. Link Slowly backs up reachimg for his boomarang. Then link throws the boomarang, Smacking the dog in the head. The dog greets link (holding his head) and takes him to his father...
the dog growled for a reason that i dont know (maybe link had a doggy treat in his pants or somthing)

[Mega Link]

He is a wolf puppy. And that moment he is hunting.
I can use part of your idea. "Link backs up, grabs his boomerang and throws it at the pup. But that just just makes him angry. Now it's a mono to wolfo battle (stalfos1). When Link wins the wolf pup heads straight for his father, yelping. Link follows."

Apporoved.

[Rulehy]

How could you do that if all Link has is a boomerang?

[Mega Link]

I forgot to tell you, the king gives Link a sword at the end of the castle.

[bluedeath]

oh..

[Mega Link]

Here is a demo.