Noob's Quest(my newest quest)

[Dell297]

Hey just letting all of you know, im making a new quest, this one is about a noob!:p

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PDJ1enM6IAc

If the link above doesnt work then try this. Then watch it on the channel.

http://www.youtube.com/user/WelchDrew?feature=mhw4

[Anthus]

Your dungeons look decent, but there are some empty screens here an there. I'll admit, I did not pay as much attention to the design as I did just how the screens looked, but they appear to be good. Maybe throw some blocks down in the emptier rooms (unless they remain empty for a reason).

The overworld though.. I have to say looks pretty bland. It looks like a good structure, but the screens in the "dark/ lava" area need something. There are a lot of empty screens.

Basically, just make each screen not look like the last, and your good.

[Dell297]

Have I at least improved a little from my 3 crap quests?