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Patrick Spulock
01-06-2008, 11:55 PM
Hello Guys,I Decided that I am going to use the Pure Tileset To make a KH Quest and I adready got a plot down,But I would like any help you guys can give me.

So anyway,Here is the plot and I plan to do this game in Several Quest,These Several Quest will call "episodes" because each episode will contain 4 worlds and the only way to get to each wolrd will be to find the door.I also now know how to use layering and insta-warp to create cutscenes.but still any help would be greatly appreciated.

Edit:F.Y.I,The events in this series of quest take place 3 years after KH2.

==========================================
Plot:
There is the Shadows.
The Shadows where the First Children of Chaos.
Then came Void the second Child.
Then finally came Light.
Then came the Nameless One,
Sometimes called the Outsider
It is less then nothing.
Not much is know about this entity.
Only that it seem to exist but it really doesnt.
It try to take the existance of other beings,
But every times it fails,because it never did exist.
Until one day.........
----------------------Cast----------------------------

******************Heroes*********************
Rean:The newcomer and the unlikely hero that will
put a stop to the evil activity of the Outsider Cult.

Sora:The keyblade's chosen one

Riku:A friend of Sora's

===============Villains====================
^^^^^^^^^^^^The Outsider Cult^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
.........................Background............... .....................
Members of the Outsider Cult are
seeking to recreate Kingdoms Hearts
in order to bring the Outsider into existance
for their purpose of creating a new world
order,in which they will rule supreme,unless
Rean stop them before it is too late.
.................................................. .............................................
Astef:The First Member and The Leader of the Outsider
Cult,he is a strong leader with a shadowy personality
and a is a well known master of both sword and spells.

Vemonis:The Second Member of the Outsider Cult and
A mysterious Second in Command Nobody has ever seen
his face except his fellow cult member.

Garriso:The Third member of the Outsider Cult that is
often seen with his partner Zerin,Garriso often wield
a javelin which he use to subdue his opponents.

Zerin:The Fourth member of the Outsider Cult that is
often seen with his partner Garriso,his prefered weapon
of choice is a Sword.

Faduelor:The Fifth member of the Outsider Cult whose
wield a pair of Flame Discs and has a mysterious past.
His nobody was Axel who Sora defeated in the World
of Darkness.

Cavior:The Sixth member of the Outsider Cult,He is constanly
volenteering to do the most dangerous mission of the Cult in
hope that He will be promoted up a few ranks.he often prefers
to summon monster to do his dirty work for him.

Daemia:The Seventh and last member of the Outsider Cult
She is the only woman in Outsider Cult.Daemia is a constant
magic user who will stop at nothing to accomplise the Goal
of the Outsider Cult.
.................................................. .................................................. ........
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^The United Villains^^^^^^^^
........................................Background .................................................
These Villains are often in control of the heartless and they too
are trying to make a new Kingdom Hearts so that can wipe out
the good guys once and for all.
.................................................. .................................................. ............
Maleficent:She is the leader of The United Villains and
she does not tolerate failure from her fellow villains.

Pete:Maleficent's loyal Second in Command,Pete still
has a bone to pick with King Mickey,Sora,Donald,And
Goofy.But Now he has met his match in Strengh with
King Bowser,the Koopa King.

King Bowser:This Koopa hails from The Mushroom Kingdom
and with Maleficent help, is planning to use the heartless to
conquer the mushroom kingdom and to defeat his arch enemy
Super Mario once and for all,but will his plan succeed?

Sa'luk:Come From the Cave of The Forty Thieves near Agrabah.
He is a ruthless, violent brute, and he seems to have pleasure in killing.
and he want the Hand of Midas,but the only thing stopping him is Aladdin.
but now he plans to use the heartless in his plan to gain the Rod of the Oracle.

Dr.Albert Wily:Althougth he is Mad Scientist from Mega City,he has tried time
and time again to conquer the world,but the only thing stopping him is his robotic
arch enemy, Megaman.but now he is using The Heartless to take over the world.

Capt. Davy Jones:He is a infamous pirate captian who is much feared by all sailor
except Captian Jack Sparrow. but jack owes davy jones 100 souls and he will not stop
until Jack pay his debt.

Ganon:A Gerudo from the Gerudo deserts,Ganon want to use the Triforce to take
over hyrule but every time he trys,his arch enemy Link,the hero of time stop him.
but now with the heartless's help,ganon is going to try once more to take the triforce.
++++++++++++++++++++Enemies+++++++++++++++++++
Nobodies:Formerly under Organization XIII Control,
now they take commands from the Outsider Cult.

Heartless:Althougth it seemed that Maleficent was defeated at
the World That Never Was,in reality they both escaped and
is once again using the heartless for their evil plans
=============================================

Oh, and by the way,Rean is supposed to kinda like Roxas with Dark Brown
Hair,and I do need sprites for him that would fit in Pure's Pallete.

And I also made a list of boss fights for episode one:

Bosses
Destiny Island(KH1)
1.Heartless Boss Dark Side
2.Faduelor

Mushroom Kingdom(A Generic Super Mario Bros Game)
1.Heartless Boss Kurt Zisa
2.Bowser
3.Cavior

Mega City(Mega Man 7)
1.Heartless Boss Barrel Centipede
2.Doctor Albert Wily
3.Daemia

Paris(Hunchback Of Notre Dame)
1.Parasite Cage
2.Frollo
+++++++++++++++++++++++++
Will any of you guys help me?

Edit:I fixed a few spacing errors.

MasterSwordUltima
01-07-2008, 02:58 AM
You plan on doing this all with the Pure Tileset? Good luck there.

Is this your first quest? Or rather, first major quest? Because if you've just only learned how to do insta-warp and all that, no offense, but I don't think you're going to get far. And because of that, I don't think anybody is going to want to help, other than saying "Sounds neat, I'll take a crack at it when its done."

Also, this sounds like its going to use a buttload of custom tiles. How are you at spriting? Or atleast ripping? You should atleast read up on it to get a better grasp of things, instead of editing Link's hat off and changing his colors [I've seen some quests with "whatever hero from whatever game" who seem to resemble Link too much].

It just seems like you decided to make this game a couple hours ago and want to throw it all together just to say that you have an awesome quest out. The best quests out there have taken months at the earliest.

...and what the hell have I done with ZC in the five or six years that I've been here? Just my thought on it...

[also, its incredibly difficult to read your posts...youch, O_O]

Patrick Spulock
01-07-2008, 08:53 PM
You plan on doing this all with the Pure Tileset? Good luck there.

Is this your first quest? Or rather, first major quest? Because if you've just only learned how to do insta-warp and all that, no offense, but I don't think you're going to get far. And because of that, I don't think anybody is going to want to help, other than saying "Sounds neat, I'll take a crack at it when its done."

Also, this sounds like its going to use a buttload of custom tiles. How are you at spriting? Or atleast ripping? You should atleast read up on it to get a better grasp of things, instead of editing Link's hat off and changing his colors [I've seen some quests with "whatever hero from whatever game" who seem to resemble Link too much].


[also, its incredibly difficult to read your posts...youch, O_O]

MasterSwordUltima, This is my first major quest, and yes I been studying several quest,as well as studying a few unpassworded quest.(i,e ShadowTiger's Prophecy Tileset which had an unfinished quest in it.)and I had read several threads On PureZC and AGF about quest making.
I was hoping I could have some help of any sort.But not of the idle sort
this is not just MY quest,It will be EVERYONE'S Quest.I was thinking we could work together on this quest(I aready got several MP3's and and general map of level one predesigned in a Microsoft Word Document as well as making Destiny Isle In the Quest File)But seperation and individulisn(as well the darkness In Our Hearts:D)has limit US to a few collaberation(i.e DarkFlameWolf's And Petoe's Lost Isle Game)can WE make a quest together as a *D-Team*?

*Development Team*

bluedeath
01-08-2008, 04:52 PM
All I have to say is good luck.

Patrick Spulock
01-08-2008, 05:49 PM
Quoting Myself:Rean is supposed to kinda like Roxas with Dark Brown
Hair,and I do need sprites for him that would fit in Pure's Pallete.

I am currently using The BS Zelda Boy Mascot as my hero sprite,If I can't make a Roxas like hero sprite,then can you guys at least make a hatless version of The BS Zelda Boy Mascot with brown hair for me.

Patrick Spulock
01-10-2008, 06:06 PM
I made some Cutscenes and I am still working on my quest,If anyone still wants to help me with this quest you guys still have an opertunity,and F.Y.I this topic is not dead yet and it will not go down without a fight and a few snapshots

bobrocks95
01-12-2008, 12:53 PM
If I see a few screenshots, maybe of some custom tiles, I may be able to lend some help.(what little I have to offer)

MasterSwordUltima
01-13-2008, 01:37 PM
If you truly want to make this happen, seriously...spellcheck.

The respect/help you get on AGN has a lot to do with how intelligent you act.
Proper grammar is a sign of higher intelligence as opposed to constant incorrect grammar.

Patrick Spulock
01-18-2008, 06:45 PM
Now I got few good screenshots of my quest and I am looking forward to
finishing Level One, But I got a question about some of My screenshots.
are they good enough to be called Top Quality? because I did some very
heavy duty work with Layering and Custom Graphics.

http://img220.imageshack.us/my.php?image=zelda001ee3.png

http://img220.imageshack.us/my.php?image=zelda002zh0.png

http://img220.imageshack.us/my.php?image=zelda005lk8.png

http://img70.imageshack.us/my.php?image=zelda007yq9.png

http://img220.imageshack.us/my.php?image=zelda008ff1.png

http://img220.imageshack.us/my.php?image=zelda017dz9.png

http://img220.imageshack.us/my.php?image=zelda021ez0.png

bobrocks95
01-19-2008, 01:23 PM
Did you make those character sprites yourself? They look pretty good. Oh, and the one guy in the second image looks exactly like that guy from Final Fantasy, that one's a very nice quality.

Patrick Spulock
01-19-2008, 04:46 PM
no, some of those spites are ripped from Joe123 FFA tileset.

MasterSwordUltima
01-19-2008, 06:11 PM
Well, if you want me to systematically go through this, sure.

S1_: Seems too busy. Too many 1-tile objects going on, too blocky. Also, give the crown some shading, not just one colour.

S2_:Again, get some shading. One color per color is not "Top Quality". Also, they live in caves? Hmm...

S3_:The battle area is a complete rectangle. Also, the consistency with the sprites doesn't seem to exist. Sora? has a huge-ass head, while Riku? has an FF4 style body.

S4_:I sadly see nothing more than 8-bit quality sprites on the BS Zelda tiles. Makes the tiles look awesome, but not so much the characters.

S5_:Well now it seems like you're using a completely different tileset. You need to atleast edit these tiles so they flow together better. I'd hate to see the transitions between the beach area and that forest area.

S6_S7: These are both nothing more than stock tiles. You've kept the same sprites for the candle and the wooden sword. These go better with the forest tiles atleast.

All in all, I'm glad you're actually working on it. However, it really lacks originality in a lot of areas. Having a few custom character sprites really isn't enough to push it over the edge. The dungeon looks like its got potential, however it looks nothing more than a Zelda dungeon. If its Kingdom Hearts-esque, why not have heart designs or something engraved along the walls of the dungeon, or perhaps a more prominent keyhole design, [as in, the large Kingdom Hearts style ones].

Patrick Spulock
01-23-2008, 11:43 PM
I will try to work on those problems you noted,MasterSwordUltima.

Patrick Spulock
02-03-2008, 08:13 PM
I thimk this quest will have be put on hold for a while,because I am currently experiencing a very bad case of a creator's block {like a writer's block)