obi
11-01-2003, 07:25 PM
heh, you all probably thought I meant the member, but no!
Its the name of the new poem I just wrote, hope you like it and any critisism will be happily recieved :)
The Successor
An emptiness,
A pit,
Some deep dark hole.
Full of nothing but spite,
Lusting revenge,
Lusting pain.
Never looked on again by the Successor
Who’s dashed dreams brought bitterness,
The bitterness also unheard.
From past lessons learned,
Were actions made.
From past truths denied,
Tears were forged.
The Successor in shambles,
Requisite dreams denied.
Torn apart by hatred,
Yet held together with a love.
A love no more they say,
Any options recalled,
The past belittled.
The present ignored.
The Successor in ruins,
Unto dreams rebuilt.
All wishes forgotten,
All calls unanswered.
The hope…
The dream…
All lost!
All gone!
The successor no longer succeeds…
By Obi Khan 1/11/03
Its the name of the new poem I just wrote, hope you like it and any critisism will be happily recieved :)
The Successor
An emptiness,
A pit,
Some deep dark hole.
Full of nothing but spite,
Lusting revenge,
Lusting pain.
Never looked on again by the Successor
Who’s dashed dreams brought bitterness,
The bitterness also unheard.
From past lessons learned,
Were actions made.
From past truths denied,
Tears were forged.
The Successor in shambles,
Requisite dreams denied.
Torn apart by hatred,
Yet held together with a love.
A love no more they say,
Any options recalled,
The past belittled.
The present ignored.
The Successor in ruins,
Unto dreams rebuilt.
All wishes forgotten,
All calls unanswered.
The hope…
The dream…
All lost!
All gone!
The successor no longer succeeds…
By Obi Khan 1/11/03