Oh yes!!!! NEW POEM TIME!!!!!1

[Goat]

It's been written once
But stated twice
That the time has come
To end my life
Stopping the torture
Killing the pain
Destroying the hate
Filled with disdain
Back to the abyss
Into the unknown
Distancing myself
From the path I've been shown
Slow and painful
The death that I've earned
Begging for heaven
Yet starting to burn
Falling faster
Impossible to quit
Not sure if I want to
Ready to submit
Can't find the begenning
Exploring the end
Asking forgivness
Consumed by sin
Learning to live with
The decisions I've made
Accepting my fate
Starting to fade
Into the nothing
I've been for years
Never reedeming
Conquered by fears

[MrCow]

very deep.. and very good. goat you just own

[Bloodstar64]

This is the one you posted at ZCN. It's quite nice... You should try writing another one.

[moocow]

Awesome , Goat.... you da man! :)

[ShadowTiger]

Tsk Tsk Tsk, ... Goat. You're surpassing your field. Stop it before you freakin explode. :p :clap:

I wonder what my English teacher would say. (Properly quoted with author and all.)

[Michael Moore]

Interesting Poem, Goat.

[Goat]

Originally posted by Bloodstar64
This is the one you posted at ZCN. It's quite nice... You should try writing another one.

It was posted here first. I have written many others, there is a link in my sig.