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Delusional rage
Seduced by corruption
Unstable insanity
Internal combustion
Lashing out
Obtaining control
Breaking down
Freeing my soul
Tears are common
From years of abuse
Killing me slowly
Like a poorly tied noose
Ridicule & torture
My exclusive sensations
No hope at all
Only frustrations
Never at peace
Stuck in a dream
Withering away
Longing to scream
Mentally confined
Praying for extinction
Life or death
No clear distinction
Asking for help
Without a reply
Begging for mercy
Not wanting to cry
Spiraling down
With no escape
Longing for bliss
Emotionally raped
MANDRAG GANON
09-14-2003, 10:39 PM
Right on. This is cool, its cool how you used like 3 words a line. when ever I read things like this I wish so much that I could write as goodas this lol. Good Job Goat, this rocks.
Master Ghaleon
09-14-2003, 11:19 PM
Nice poem Goat!! Are you gonna publish a book with all your poems? Keep up the good work.
linkofzelda1
09-15-2003, 12:14 AM
Originally posted by Master Ghaleon
Nice poem Goat!! Are you gonna publish a book with all your poems? Keep up the good work.
Yeah man, you should totally publish a book. I'd buy it :)
SATAN
09-15-2003, 02:28 AM
nice goatman! but i won´t buy a book of it!
I will buy your sould instead!
Wanna sell?
Thats all!
carrot red
09-15-2003, 03:10 AM
Very emotional as usual, Goat. Well done.
Originally posted by SATAN
I will buy your sould instead!
You will buy his sould? Whatever.:eyebrow:
Originally posted by SATAN
Thats all!
Somehow you remind me of a cartoon with that quote at the end of every post.
SATAN
09-15-2003, 03:31 AM
I meant soul! i guess i hit the D be accident.....
And i'm not a cartoon, just a sick twisted mind........
Thats about it......
Ganonator
09-15-2003, 04:31 AM
excellent, Goat.
I do like the way you crafted your words. It really touched me in the end. If only you physically touched me that way... err...
Hope to see more!
moocow
09-15-2003, 01:27 PM
Awesome, Goat. :) :thumbsup:
I have actually thought about publishing a book with all my poems when I have enough written. Anyways, the rest of my poems are located here (http://goat.armageddongames.net/funny/poems.txt) in case anyone wants to take a gander at 'em.
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