The Desperado
01-23-2003, 02:21 AM
Wrote a poem for the ending of my book, but i dont know if its good or not. Any feedback would be great.
You always held me up,
Even when I was wrong,
We together,
Sang the same fucking song,
You were the reason,
I could make it through the day,
You stood by my side,
No matter what anyone would say,
You always had my back,
And you always had my trust,
Every memory,
Is just a picture of us,
You never let me down,
And you never would give up,
Having you as a friend,
Was a great strike of luck,
You could always read my mind,
Knew what I was gonna do,
Everything I see,
Is a memory of you,
With you I never,
Had to hide what I thought,
With you I never,
Had to play a fucking part,
You loved me as I am,
And I loved you as you were,
Your friendly laughter,
Was my troubled minds cure,
I’m sorry that I,
Could not be as good of friend as you,
Now that you’re gone,
I don’t know what I’m gonna do,
But I know your still by my side,
And you’re always in my heart,
But my world seems to be,
fallin’ apart,
I wish you were here,
To tell me it’s ok,
And help me through,
This long, cold day,
But you’re far away from here,
Probably in a better place,
But I’d still give anything,
Just to see your face,
To hear you tell a joke,
Or at least try to,
Tell me that I’m dumb,
Or what I need to do,
But it’s all over now,
I just hope that you knew,
I’m a better person,
Just for knowing you.
You always held me up,
Even when I was wrong,
We together,
Sang the same fucking song,
You were the reason,
I could make it through the day,
You stood by my side,
No matter what anyone would say,
You always had my back,
And you always had my trust,
Every memory,
Is just a picture of us,
You never let me down,
And you never would give up,
Having you as a friend,
Was a great strike of luck,
You could always read my mind,
Knew what I was gonna do,
Everything I see,
Is a memory of you,
With you I never,
Had to hide what I thought,
With you I never,
Had to play a fucking part,
You loved me as I am,
And I loved you as you were,
Your friendly laughter,
Was my troubled minds cure,
I’m sorry that I,
Could not be as good of friend as you,
Now that you’re gone,
I don’t know what I’m gonna do,
But I know your still by my side,
And you’re always in my heart,
But my world seems to be,
fallin’ apart,
I wish you were here,
To tell me it’s ok,
And help me through,
This long, cold day,
But you’re far away from here,
Probably in a better place,
But I’d still give anything,
Just to see your face,
To hear you tell a joke,
Or at least try to,
Tell me that I’m dumb,
Or what I need to do,
But it’s all over now,
I just hope that you knew,
I’m a better person,
Just for knowing you.