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Jabberwocky
06-17-2002, 06:32 PM
I'm putting it here cuz the Ent. forum is kinda slow and I want other opinions not just people that are interested in it. whaddya think?




Hushaby

This is a good time to start something new
say a beginning
Haven't always been there but I'll always
try to be around
I met you when I first got here. I'm back
but I can't find you
Can't count all the times I've felt so
alone and empty
You always told me don't be brave just run
if theres trouble
I'm afraid to wake up and find
you're gone

Oh no don't cry. Everything will be OK
If you let it
No no don't cry. It'll be OK
You just have to try

You've been my best friend the
one and only
From two worlds of brokeness we go together
like peas and carrots
I don't know what your doing now but
I hope it makes you happy

Oh no don't cry. Everything will be OK
If you let it
No no don't cry. It'll be OK
You just have to try

say a beginning try to be around
but I can't find you
alone and empty if theres trouble
you're gone
one and only like peas and carrots
I hope it makes you happy

Oh no don't cry. Everything will be OK
If you let it
No no don't cry. It'll be OK
You just have to try

Oh no don't cry. It'll will be OK
If you let it
No no don't cry. It can be OK
We just have to try

Shes gonna run away from it
Shes gonna run away again
Shes gonna run away
Shes gonna run away from everything
Shes gonna run away again
Shes gonna run away
Shes gonna run away from it
Shes gonna get away from me
Shes gonna run away from it
Shes gonna run away again
Shes gonna run away
Shes gonna run away from everything
Shes gonna run away again
Shes gonna run away
Shes gonna run away from it
Shes gonna get away from me
Dechipher
06-17-2002, 06:37 PM
not bad....sorta has the same feeling as that hoobastank or whatever song.....btw, you coulda pyut it in GED, sure its slow, but still,, more peopl ethat are the artistic type would view it and the like...
Jabberwocky
06-17-2002, 06:39 PM
hoobastank? I guess I should check that out
Dechipher
06-17-2002, 06:52 PM
hmmmmm......do you not watch music television??? Me niether, except really late, cause thats when music is on, so......watch MTV really late....they actually have music...
Jabberwocky
06-17-2002, 06:56 PM
Sorry got no cable sattelite not even a pair of rabbit ears
Daarkseid
06-17-2002, 06:57 PM
MTV sucks...
AlexMax
06-17-2002, 07:36 PM
Let's see, the host is coming from the same place as SUCCESSOR, (There is a minute difference, but it seems to be coming from a university, the same one)....

He';s posting well made rhymes...

Hi SUCCESSOR.

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Breaker
06-18-2002, 02:18 AM
Topic reopened. Granted, he is banned, but there's nothing wrong with the content of the post. :shrug:

I thought it sucked, to be quite honest. Horrible lyrics, indeed.
PrfectGREG
06-18-2002, 09:16 AM
if it is succesor, hes prob making fun of me...
Masamune
06-18-2002, 10:36 AM
NAW.... HE WOULD COME UP WITH SOMETHING MUCH BETTER IF HE WERE TO MAKE FUN OF YOU.
PrfectGREG
06-18-2002, 10:58 AM
why was that om all caps?
Selah
06-18-2002, 12:28 PM
the lyrics are semy semy.