Opinions on 2 more songs I wrote

[PrfectGREG]

I need alot of feedback. I want to leabr Bass and maybe start a band over the Summer, so i have been writing alot of songs. Most of my freinds enjoy them. But I need alot of Diff opions from other people so, anyone who reads these just post a lil feedback, thanks. :-)

"School Girls"

The girls at my school aren't worth my time
They treat me like garbage
And that’s just fine

I’ll mind my own business
If you just mind your own
If I wanted your opinion
I would call you on the phone

Don’t expect me
To go out of my way
Because I am very independent
And that’s all I can say

I don’t need you in my life
I don’t want you either
You fill me with hatred
And give me a fever

You act all high and mighty
You say that you don’t care
You give me glares of evil
And fill me with fear

The girls at my school aren't worth my time
They treat me like garbage
And that’s just fine


I have made it this far
And I have made it alone
Girls are worthless
They just bitch and moan

Why waste your time
Why waste your pride
To please a stupid bitch
Who will stab you in the side?

If you want to be happy
Take my advice
Girls are not worth it
Your hand will have to suffice

and:

"Days with Friends"

Some days are better then others
Some days I just have more fun
But some days just tear me to shreds

The best times of my life
Have been spent with friends
The worst times
I have spent alone

I hope they know
How much they mean to me
And that I am thankful to have them
By my side

Friends keep me going
And friends don’t let me stop
Friends make life worth living
And I am thankful for that

Some days I feel rejected
Some days I feel fine
But some days are very hectic
Why must I waste all my time

The best times of my life
Have been spent with friends
The worst times
I have spent alone

I hope they know
How much they mean to me
And that I am thankful to have them
By my side

Friends keep me going
And friends don’t let me stop
Friends make life worth living
And I am thankful for that

[Drunken Tiger]

Wow.. :eek:

Two completely differenct topics...:D

Nice!!:thumbsup:

[Jer1400]

Very good, man! :thumbsup::clap:

[PrfectGREG]

Thanks, guys.

(can I get some more coments please :D )

[DarkPanther]

Pretty cool. If you ever get anything going, let us hear it. :)

[PrfectGREG]

“Perfect”

You're Perfect
An angel in my mind
You’re beautiful
And Worth all of my time
You’re funny
A feature that’s hard to find

I just want you to know
That I'm falling fast for you
Perfection at its best
Don’t you know its true?

Time spent with you is bliss
I want you more then ever
Spending time with you
And wondering if we’ll kiss

I hope you feel the same
And your not leading me on
Because if that’s true
I will feel pain

You're Perfect
An angel in my mind
You’re beautiful
And Worth all of my time
You’re funny
A feature that’s hard to find

If we were together
I would be your man
Making you feel special
By doing all I can

Remember what I said
All the things I feel
Perfection at its best
Your heart I will steel

You’re the only one
That I truly care for
Let’s stop playing games
And start something more

You're Perfect
An angel in my mind
You’re beautiful
And Worth all of my time
You’re funny
A feature that’s hard to find


thoughts anyone, dont be afraid to criticise :D