My poem.

[Gerudo]

Allegiance:

a bond of friendship,
a piece of mind,
something that will not slip,
and something that is never blind,
it is there, for good and for bad,
the mood does not affect this,
if you are happy, or you are sad,
it is not something you dismiss,
i will always be here you you,
and i hope you for me,
its the hope to continue,
to a limitless degree,
the bond in unwritten,
and it knows no end,
if it comes to when,
do not worry, because I am your friend,
I pledge my allegiance to you, though,
in all its glory,
and i hope you know, this is my story,
my allegiance to you...
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poem reposted... *sigh*

[Breaker]

Yea, you're never getting laid with shit like that.

[Beldaran]

Originally posted by Breaker
Yea, you're never getting laid with shit like that.


Even though he could have been more supportive, he is very much correct.:(

[Breaker]

Not being rude, it's a very nice amateur poem...but a girl would probably end up afraid of you, instead of going with the crush. I know I would if you wrote me a love letter that had the word allegiance.

[Gerudo]

whatever, i thoght maybe i could get some good comments out of this, but whatever...

[Breaker]

I bet you have a sexy ass that makes up for it all, Gerudo. I love you, ;p;

[Beldaran]

Originally posted by Breaker
I bet you have a sexy ass that makes up for it all, Gerudo. I love you, ;p;

LOL

[Gerudo]

its not about "getting laid", you didnt put me in the greatest of moods... i am alone in this world, and i am tired of being the only person with out a damn love life.

i shared my poem becuase i thought maybe, JUST MAYBE, someone other than the girl would like it...

breaker, i wanna tell you off, but im not gonna... i dont feel like getting banned for something as stupid as flaming.

if you cant tell, i am a little pissed, i will cool off in a while...

[Breaker]

I liked the poem Gerudo, please put it back in your original post. Ilubu4eber, you know that. I just don't want some girl coming between us.

[Rijuhn]

Since you removed it all I can gather from this thread is thaty ou made some saddistic poem about killing women or something of that nature. Please correct me if I'm wrong, and I hope I am.

[Gerudo]

no, it was a poem i wrote concerning someone i really like...

it was a lighter side of me, and something a really never reveal to anyone. and for just cause...

oh, for those of you who care, its been reposted

[Rijuhn]

Oh, it's nothing bad. I think it's well written, and I like it. I just wasn't sure until now. I don't think you're gay or anything, it takes a lot of courage to let other know how you feel (deep inside).

[Gerudo]

:O

jesus, i explicity said "its for this girl i know" where the hell does being gay come into this?!?!