Another Song I wrote...

[PrfectGREG]

Its a little Emoish but hey thats me. Its how Iv ever felt about any girl Iv ever liked all sumed up in a song. My freinds band likes it and might playit 4 me at 1 of there concerts but I just wanna get some more feed back from u guys. Well here it is. Be honest I dont care if u slam it, but Im hoping u guys enjoy it.

(Empty Inside)

No matter how hard I try
No matter what I do
I will always be alone
Thinking of you

You’re always on my mind
I see you everyday
Your presence clogs my thoughts
Theirs nothing I can say

I want you in my life
I have to find a way
I will do all that I can
Just to hear you say

You will always love me
Through the hard times
And the good times
You will always love me
Forever yeah
Forever and ever

You walk by me and smile
You flirt and carry on
It’s so confusing
What have I done wrong?

Now you’re angry with me
For shit I haven’t done
You acted like you love me
And ended all this fun

I want you in my life
I have to find a way
I will do all that I can
Just to hear you say

You will always love me
Through the hard times
And the good times
You will always love me
Forever yeah
Forever and ever

[Dark Dude]

nice...

[Drunken Tiger]

Thats pretty good..:thumbsup:

[PrfectGREG]

Thanks, when u feel a certain way the lyrics just flow. Im hoping I can tap that feeling and make alot of decent songs.

[obi]

wow, that is good. :)